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I have left her. I cry.
Less than eight months she took to come into my life. When she did she did with one whisper. One gaze. One moment of bright eyes. Her fingers grasped the air. One grasp. Her fists went down to her feet. Her toes spread out once before relaxing. Her back straightened once. Once upon a time. I left her. In the white blue hands of strangers. I did hold her but she was already cold. I never loved so intensely so short. She went before I left her. I gave her life. She gave me emptiness. I gave her a second. She took eternity.
She never left me. She never cried.

©  2009 Lanhosone
©2009-2010 ~Lanhosone
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:iconkikyonazumay:
Hot damn,
aint you a poet now.

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âme de pierre
larmes de sang
ailes coupées
je suis vide

~kikyonazumay
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:iconmir-k:
I love this, don't know much about poetry but as long as it gets to the heart it's good for me :)
Anyway death has always been powerful and emotive...

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Jump! You may fall down...Or learn to fly!
:iconchloerosexx:
i la la la love this

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Chloe Rose

to love is to live, to love is to lose
to live is to lose, and get through
:iconlanhosone:
i a a a preciate!
:iconchloerosexx:
yerpp :]
i like itt!!

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Chloe Rose

to love is to live, to love is to lose
to live is to lose, and get through
:iconnx-7:
It’s great imagery albeit a sad story.
:iconmonstredulochness:
My comment is not really original but I loved your poem. I liked the style even better than the "story". (I'm so bad at english... My first language is german xD)

Lucie (lovely lines)
:iconkatie-eitak:
wow.... this is so powerful.. its amazing its just... inderscriable... its just... wow
(i should probably read some more of ur stuff)

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:heart::heart: heaven isn't too far...:heart::heart:
:heart::heart: heaven is where you are... :heart::heart:
:icondropdeadkat:
Well done.
I love it!! :]
x

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"Love is a smoke made with the fume of sighs. Being purged, a fire sparkling in lovers' eyes. Being vexed, a sea nourished with lovers' tears. What is it else? A madness most discreet, a choking gall and a preserving sweet."

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